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The sun tickles my forehead in the morning, and I think of you.
Every time I wake, I want it to be you beside me.
I never want you to hurt again.

I know this isn’t the way its supposed to be.
Man loving man; who would have thought?

I do believe God tells us in the Bible to go forth and love.
If this isn’t love, then I’d like to know what is.

Does God make mistakes?
I should hope not.

I don’t think he made a mistake with you.  
I don’t think he made a mistake with me.

Mistake.  That is the definition of the last year and a half of my life.
I never loved her in the same way I love you.

A smile on your lips brightens my day.
And your touch, even if only for a moment, puts me at rest.

I want you to be happy, like the old days,
Every day laughing, loving, and enjoying life.

When I see that lonely look in your pristine eyes,
I want to hold you forever.

Even if we’ll never be more than friends, you need to know,
No matter what you have done or what you may do;

I will always need you.

I will always wait for you.

I will always love you.
©2007-2009 ~RychelManBoy
:iconrychelmanboy:

Author's Comments

So..... do I give this to him?

And Rachel, I didn't mean to sound so harsh. I always loved you, just not like this. I'm sorry. I should have been honest a long time ago, I know.

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:iconblakridershadow:
Holy fuck dude... wow.. it is great it is a burning passion that is deep within this... we need to talk !!! Please call me. :D
i will give you my number in a note.
oh and don't give it to him.

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"Yesterday was once tomorrow..."
:iconashenweepingwillow:
that is the sweetest thing in the entire world. I want a boy to write something like that about me.

I was listening to Hilary Duff's "Fly" while I read this, and it worked.

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it's not about the money we make
it's about the passions that we ache for
:iconthruthelookingglass:
this.is.incredible.

I'm speechless.This is so deep and so well written.I completely agree with ~ashenweepingwillow,I wish a boy would write something like this about me.This is beautiful,for lack of a better word.I seriously...have no idea what to say about this.It's amazing.

As for whether or not you should give this to him,I'd say...go on whatever hunch you have...but think about whether you think he feels the same way or not because you could be putting yourself in an immensly awkward position.Either way,good luck! :hug: :D :glomp:

~:heart:~

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:star: Mein Klien Stern :star:
¢lemontea =Wohmatak
Je suis le soleil dans ton ciel
My Stock ~Li11y-St0ck
~:heart:~
:iconreinfire:
Wow, when you asked me if I'd read your poem, I thought you meant the last one - and for the record, I know you didn't love me like that. We'll always love each other as friends, as brother and sister, and I'm glad that you can truly be happy now. You deserve to finally be happy.
:iconpetit-oiseau:
'When I see that lonely look in your pristine eyes,
I want to hold you forever.'

literature gold. :heart:

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gl:earth:bal family.

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